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Oof, that ending line. That one's going to haunt me the next time I get my usual chicken mcnuggets from McDs.

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It haunts me with every delicious bite

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"There is only nature and what survives." - it was hard to pick out a 'best' line from this piece. The piece is basically 100% quotable. But I think this one encapsulates the whole theme of the story.

Well written dialogue, plenty of humor, with some full-dark undertones: great piece.

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Thanks for reading it and for the thoughtful feedback!

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