The stream of consciousness, the biblical references; everything was so well done. Genuinely, a clever addition to the Blackwater experience! Thank you so much for taking the time to share this amazing piece!
Someone wrote a Russian twist on Blackwater but this is the first Chinese twist I've seen. WOW. This is remarkable. Spooky, enhanced by the clever use of footnotes which appear helpful explainers, but kind of increased the suspense. That interlude in the middle "HEY YOU 2024 IS YEAR OF THE DRAGON" was alarming.
The stream of consciousness, the biblical references; everything was so well done. Genuinely, a clever addition to the Blackwater experience! Thank you so much for taking the time to share this amazing piece!
Thank you for reading! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading the Blackwater Files!
Nicely Done @skepticfail. I l like the Chinese take on Blackwater.
I think I'd take the dragon over the sludge that is the undertow.
You did great on the research on culture.
Two thumbs up.
Thanks for reading!!
This was so good. The Revelation cites, the imagery, the POV switch at the end. Wow.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Someone wrote a Russian twist on Blackwater but this is the first Chinese twist I've seen. WOW. This is remarkable. Spooky, enhanced by the clever use of footnotes which appear helpful explainers, but kind of increased the suspense. That interlude in the middle "HEY YOU 2024 IS YEAR OF THE DRAGON" was alarming.
This is very well done!
I just read that one today and thought it was very interesting! Thanks for giving this one a read! :)